Poem: Ambiance of Waiting

[Lucian D'Revere]

(General Board is General =o )

Emotions turbulent,
Yet subservient
To a point,
A pondered line-
A great divide
Between our eyes

Under commons
Hearthed and warm,
Within the mind
A cold winter storm

Withered and drawn
Battered and broken,
Still moving on
Nothing is token

Instantly patient
Slowly quick,
A life gone by
More life to pick

Hands of fire
Honed in hearts,
Within white mirrors
Truly a farce

Failing time
Time succeeding,
Being primed
For barely breathing

If not for who
Who isn't me,
Than who would be
My 'constantine'?

Limits now
Freedom far,
Surrounded in
Metaphorical bars

A prison of romance
Death row to smiles
A comfort in distance
Never worth while

Unknowing to me
Known for sure
Tomorrow comes,
Yesterday a blur

So vividly seen
Masterly locked
Pinned to the mind
A deserting flock

[Clouse or Dale]

Bravo I like I like

[Lord Seamus Mcfee]

Where is the like button

[Clouse or Dale]

idk thats why i was forced to comment

[Lucian D'Revere]

Thanks for the kudos. x3
I think the 'like' button is the Exalt button. the only bad part is I think you can only Exalt once per day. o.o